ext_137839 ([identity profile] shayera.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] xparrot 2011-04-02 02:59 pm (UTC)

Aww, Gintoki. I can absolutely believe this, the way he does this to help a friend, for the here and now... It doesn't do anything for himself, and he isn't thinking about long-term consequences - he's just protecting what he can protect. I can see that as a very Gintoki thing to do, if he thought that's what it took.

And I love how you make it clear to the reader that Gintoki isn't taking any pleasure from this, and that he isn't in love the way Katsura is - although Katsura as the POV character doesn't notice!

Poor boys.

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