frith_in_thorns: (GD WeiLan close)
Frith ([personal profile] frith_in_thorns) wrote in [personal profile] xparrot 2019-10-09 07:00 am (UTC)

More fills are GREAT! And this was so fantastic -- I definitely can't get enough of oh-god-that's-not-a-minor-injury-Shen-Wei!

I love this description of him so dazed and shocky, and so surprised to realise that he is in fact hurt after all after he's finished focusing on Zhao Yunlan. And Zhao Yunlan fighting to stay calm and reassure him and tell him what to do as Shen Wei starts to decline alarmingly. I love all the physical details of Shen Wei's condition and how Zhao Yunlan is observing him so closely and anxiously and holding him up and doing everything he can to help. Just lovely all the way through! Thank you so much for writing this!

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