I really loved this story. Your analysis of Lex at the end was just perfect and the plot was excellent. It was just... er... all round good! I'm not entirely familiar with the cannon but I instantly understood what was going on with the story and really enjoyed it.

My favorite thing about your work, I think, is the fact you weave plot in with characterisation. It's not something you find that often and when you do find it, it's pure gold. I love that you do this so much in your fics.
Really good stuff. Thanks!