Oh I am SO excited about this story! God but I love Lex staying true to the (he thought) bitter end. I completely believe that to be in character. And this Clark, this is what I wanted and needed so desperately from the show way back then. Some sign that he understood the gravity of his lies as it impacted the lives of others. Martha and Jonathan are also, imo, in character. And yes, yes, yes: canon!Jonathan is a jerky asswad. So you didn't write him too harshly at all. I cannot wait for more!! :D