hee to your icon - nope, not OP pirates, those ^__^
As far as pacing goes...ehh, well, it could be better, but it's not that bad. --Says me, who was a fan of Dragonball Z in my day, DBZ, of the infamous "This planet will explode in 15 minutes".....TWENTY EPISODES LATER, the planet blows up. Compared to that, OP's pacing is positively frenetic. The talking, too, is par for the course for a lot of fight shounen. I've gotten used to it ('sides, if it didn't slow down like that, we wouldn't get as many shots of Zoro staggering trying to fight when mortally wounded yet again...er...yes...I perhaps enjoy that "pushed beyond all endurance" stuff a bit too much...)
As for fic...eheheheheh...be careful what you wish for? Not only are certain people gonna kill me for not working on certain other things, but OP fans are probably gonna sigh as well--not only can I not really write humor and therefore am not trying, but I don't see the yaoi... ^^;;
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As far as pacing goes...ehh, well, it could be better, but it's not that bad. --Says me, who was a fan of Dragonball Z in my day, DBZ, of the infamous "This planet will explode in 15 minutes".....TWENTY EPISODES LATER, the planet blows up. Compared to that, OP's pacing is positively frenetic. The talking, too, is par for the course for a lot of fight shounen. I've gotten used to it ('sides, if it didn't slow down like that, we wouldn't get as many shots of Zoro staggering trying to fight when mortally wounded yet again...er...yes...I perhaps enjoy that "pushed beyond all endurance" stuff a bit too much...)
As for fic...eheheheheh...be careful what you wish for? Not only are certain people gonna kill me for not working on certain other things, but OP fans are probably gonna sigh as well--not only can I not really write humor and therefore am not trying, but I don't see the yaoi... ^^;;