Regarding the briefly mentioned Pegasus society, the Luarongi were supposed to be an ancient Chinese-esque bureaucracy. I wish we'd seen Gate Ministers on other planets, because really, some should have them!
I actually have about 900 words of a followup to "GoC" - not really a sequel, just a side story from John's POV, covering the three days before the final scene, when he got rescued and came back to find Rodney in the coma. It wasn't completed on account of utter lack of plot - really it was just an excuse for me to write Rodney in a coma and bedside vigils (yay vigils!) It did include this exchange:
"Why the hell was he even in the FTC?"
"That is what we have been attempting to ascertain, Colonel." Zelenka pushes up his glasses again. "One would assume that Rodney would pick more reasonable time to get in touch with his feelings."
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I actually have about 900 words of a followup to "GoC" - not really a sequel, just a side story from John's POV, covering the three days before the final scene, when he got rescued and came back to find Rodney in the coma. It wasn't completed on account of utter lack of plot - really it was just an excuse for me to write Rodney in a coma and bedside vigils (yay vigils!) It did include this exchange:
"Why the hell was he even in the FTC?"
"That is what we have been attempting to ascertain, Colonel." Zelenka pushes up his glasses again. "One would assume that Rodney would pick more reasonable time to get in touch with his feelings."