MFU fic: Sand Trap, 2/2

[xparrot]

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Comments

[jessebee.livejournal.com]

Oh, very nice. Loved the use of the wine to tie things in at the end, and love Napoleon telling his imagination to go to hell. Very evocative in your use of imagery. And I think I'll go have me a glass of water now. ;-)

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Glad you enjoyed it - hey, if it made you thirsty, my version of the desert did its job! ^^