ext_101179 ([identity profile] jlvsclrk.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] xparrot 2010-04-25 09:47 am (UTC)

Wow, what a great read! I hadn't read Freefalling before and it was just excellent - I could really feel Lex's pain in the aftermath of the 'death' of Superman. And it was lovely to see the Kents step forward and let go of their old grudges in order to help. Wonderful!

And then there's your new story, which I liked every bit as much if not more. I really like your Connor, with his teenage bravado and painful puns but a heart of gold. The confrontation with Toyman was fun and then you shocked me when Lex nearly didn't make it out in time. Loved everything!

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