Gintama Fic: Pandemonium 3/?

[xparrot]

Took a nap today, dreamed I was watching a new ep of Gintama. Rather annoying to wake up and realize I couldn't just go watch the end!

Ff.net seems to have crashed? No matter - boldly I soldier onward! Zura makes his first appearance, and the plot slowly thickens, though it needs a bit more heat and stirring to congeal...

Gintama: Pandemonium, 3/? {4,478 words}
gen; PG-13; Yorozuya, the Shinsengumi, along with Zura and most of the rest of the cast

Chapter 3: Counting people is somewhat different from counting on people, especially in Japanese.

Read it on AO3

Comments

[pandap.livejournal.com]

I'm enjoying this a lot; can't wait for the next part.

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Hee, thank you!! More (much more!) soon to come ^^

[ah-chan.livejournal.com]

DDD: The man with the estranged wife, his brother and the children! The couple with the egg! Your Edo is so convincingly weird and wonderful.

"I can't breathe; everything's going dark...please, Kagura-chan...name...a parfait...after me..."

XD XD XD The Gin-chan parfait - surely something involving strawberry ice-cream and red beans.

And oh! The grand entrance of Zura! He and Gintoki do care :D. Also, I snorted with laughter over the Duran Duran and Zoolander puns.

Now I wonder why Gin-san has pink-eye...

[ah-chan.livejournal.com]

Ack, my bad; from insomnia. My mind was on the cattle-probing alien track ^^;, but he has already been picked by screwdriver aliens already.

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Hee, I had a lot of fun with the census-taking, glad you enjoyed it! Had fun with Zura, too (if I had a favorite other than Gin-san, it might be Zura, for being an utter lunatic...really though I can't decide, I love everyone too much!)

All I know about the Parfait a la Gintoki is that it would be too sweet for me to eat! XD

[shayera.livejournal.com]

Heeee! This census taking, I could see it happening exactly like that in the actual series, complete with gags that made laugh way more than I should have! How do you do that? XD ("Oyakodon" indeed. And of course there's listing for Unholy Abomination on the form!)

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Hee, thank you - the census taking stuff kind of just happened, and I'm just happy it worked - especially since in my head I was seeing it all as manga pages, wasn't sure if they could be translated to prose at all! ^^;