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X-parrot ([personal profile] xparrot) wrote2011-03-28 12:46 pm
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Gintama fic: Resuscitation 1/3

So I've written GinZura - but not happy OTP-compliant GinZura. Er, sorry? It's the same character continuum as "Everyone's got to write their own happy ending," but with far more sex and angst. Joui war angst, so about as un-Gintama in mood as it gets. Yeah, I dunno. Warnings for that and sadness and misleading fluff and not-very-graphic consensual sex between young men. Also potential OOC - since there's so little canon backstory to work with, the characterizations are mostly my own invention, though they may betray influence from various Joui-4 doujinshi I've read.

Gintama: Resuscitation, 1/3 {3,362 words}
R; Gintoki/Katsura, Joui war-era
"For a while Katsura tells himself that it's no more than the camaraderie of the battleground."

"The first time Katsura encounters an Amanto stun-shield, he literally doesn't know what hit him."

Read it on AO3
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[identity profile] nijibug.livejournal.com 2011-03-28 08:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Melted when Gintoki referred to himself as "Gin-san".

[identity profile] ch0copockii.livejournal.com 2011-03-28 08:50 pm (UTC)(link)
I always loved this period in Gintama... the good stuff out there for it is surprisingly little.

Also, Gintoki/Katsura story = immediate win. <3

[identity profile] hyoutan.livejournal.com 2011-03-28 09:55 pm (UTC)(link)
*bounces* One of my favorite pairings, yay!

(Am in class, so I can't read it yet, but I'm super excited to later!!!)

*Seriously, you've made my day!*

[identity profile] antimonial.livejournal.com 2011-03-29 12:36 am (UTC)(link)
There's so much I love about this that I don't even know where to begin. Crack is all jolly good, but seeing the darker side of the war/their relationship on the battlefield is always so heartbreaking and thrilling at the same time.

I love how you wrote their dialogue and meaningless (and sometimes not so meaningless) banter. Also using bickering as a way to ease the tension around them is such a Gintoki thing to do. And that wink was by far my favorite part.

And even though we only got a glimpse of Takasugi so far, I really like your characterization of him.

Really looking forward to chapters 2 and 3!

[identity profile] simsim-hb.livejournal.com 2011-03-29 02:14 am (UTC)(link)
I have to say the synopsis scared me a bit. I was almost afraid for Zura actually, but so far it doesn't seem like Gintoki actually minds which is the impression I had from "Everyone's got to write their own happy ending". Anyhow, I want to see where this goes for sure~

[identity profile] snarkydame.livejournal.com 2011-03-29 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
♥____♥ Zura! And, aw, all four of them, actually, while they're still sort of innocent, for all the blood and gore. &them;

[identity profile] shayera.livejournal.com 2011-03-29 10:38 am (UTC)(link)
Cool! It's different from canon, like you warned for, but from what very little we know of the Amanto war, it was bloody hell, and I think you capture both that and the characters as they probably were. I especially love your Gintoki dialogue. ♥

[identity profile] superkalifragi.livejournal.com 2011-04-09 07:52 am (UTC)(link)
This is beautifully written, I like how you manage to pinpoint the right words... And the story in itself is interesting too, everyone seems pretty much IC to me.