xparrot: Chopper reading (sga team)
X-parrot ([personal profile] xparrot) wrote2008-04-04 02:35 pm
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SGA: Fake Birds and Real Holidays

I [livejournal.com profile] sga_flashfic'ed again, this time for the Family challenge. Considering I didn't really know where this was going when it started - a couple of scenes in mind, that was it - I quite like how it turned out. It's sweet bordering on insulin shock, but there's some melancholy, too. And TEAM. Very much TEAM.

Also it was meant to be a couple thousand words at most. Er. Oops. Again.

SGA: Fake Birds and Real Holidays {~8,300 words}
PG, post-season 4 speculation, fluff, angst
The team descends on the Miller household. (No turkeys were harmed in the making of this story. Much to Rodney and Ronon's disappointment.)
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[identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com 2008-04-04 07:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, I thought you might. And I'd love to see Teyla actually keep her baby, I just don't think it's very likely...

Thanks for the edits, too, I've fixed 'em (except the last one I'm on the fence about; "sunken into" just sounds odd to me.) The others, yeah, hazards of editing at 6AM ^^; (arrrrgh, lead/led is my Achilles' heel, I screw that one up all the time. It's read/read, so why...damn the irregularities of the English tongue!)