So here's a question, if I clean this up for AO3: should I include more details?
I am the worst person to ask for that, because I am still super impressed that you managed such a great in medias res piece, and think this worked great! Also as you said, Shen Wei is a bit too out of it to know what's happened? So it stands fantastically well on its own, but if you wanted to add more details - you're such a good writer I could see a slightly longer version also being brilliant?
So yeah, that's no help at all I'm afraid! But if doing short pieces without scaffolding is new to you, maybe it'd be nice to post it just to see how people react, and have it in your AO3 catalogue of things you've actually written?
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Re: Comfort!tea served by Zhao Yunlan
Date: 2019-10-06 06:59 pm (UTC)I am the worst person to ask for that, because I am still super impressed that you managed such a great in medias res piece, and think this worked great! Also as you said, Shen Wei is a bit too out of it to know what's happened? So it stands fantastically well on its own, but if you wanted to add more details - you're such a good writer I could see a slightly longer version also being brilliant?
So yeah, that's no help at all I'm afraid! But if doing short pieces without scaffolding is new to you, maybe it'd be nice to post it just to see how people react, and have it in your AO3 catalogue of things you've actually written?