Lovely -- and I have no idea what went on before it (lol) I liked Gojyo and Hakkai together, you caught the rhythym of the way they are. And I loved the little throwaway line: Gotta make sure Goku's not drunk enough to ask Sanzo for a dance, he might get an ear shot off or something.
(If I did things right that should come out in Italic... ^ _ ^;;;
Impressed as I am with the drabble/ficlet/whatever (and I am) I'm even more impressed with your mother! I'm still at the hiding-fanfic-from-my-kids stage. Of course they're a whole lot younger, but I don't know that I'd ever feel comfortable exchanging slash with my daughter either -- so thumbs up!
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Date: 2005-10-08 11:25 pm (UTC)(If I did things right that should come out in Italic... ^ _ ^;;;
Impressed as I am with the drabble/ficlet/whatever (and I am) I'm even more impressed with your mother! I'm still at the hiding-fanfic-from-my-kids stage. Of course they're a whole lot younger, but I don't know that I'd ever feel comfortable exchanging slash with my daughter either -- so thumbs up!