That was so beautiful. It really captured the essence of why Al and Ed are so tragic in their current situation (as opposed to the tragedy of their past). I don't know why, exactly, but Al is definitely the better viewpoint for reflecting on this angst - maybe because I get the impression that Ed never thinks it through like Al does, he just feels it and reacts.
Thank you so much for capturing what I could not. You're an excellent writer. Wow. Just ... wow. *sparkles*
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Al-fic abounds!
Date: 2004-01-04 08:20 pm (UTC)Thank you so much for capturing what I could not. You're an excellent writer. Wow. Just ... wow. *sparkles*
~~Vikki