Date: 2007-06-17 05:37 pm (UTC)
Was just happily rereading, and noticed this:

Hearing footsteps through the door, Lex hastily tucked his hands under himself. He was halfway through the rope, not quite ready, and couldn't blow his chance until the time was right. Which hopefully would be soon; he was quite thoroughly bored. The only thing keeping utter ennui at bay was the knowledge that he had seen his captor's faces, enough to pick them from a lineup. That did not bode well for his future chances, if he failed to procure his own freedom.

In the next-to-last sentence, it should be 'captors' faces' rather than 'captor's faces.'

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