Glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, I thought you might. And I'd love to see Teyla actually keep her baby, I just don't think it's very likely...
Thanks for the edits, too, I've fixed 'em (except the last one I'm on the fence about; "sunken into" just sounds odd to me.) The others, yeah, hazards of editing at 6AM ^^; (arrrrgh, lead/led is my Achilles' heel, I screw that one up all the time. It's read/read, so why...damn the irregularities of the English tongue!)
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Date: 2008-04-04 07:33 pm (UTC)Thanks for the edits, too, I've fixed 'em (except the last one I'm on the fence about; "sunken into" just sounds odd to me.) The others, yeah, hazards of editing at 6AM ^^; (arrrrgh, lead/led is my Achilles' heel, I screw that one up all the time. It's read/read, so why...damn the irregularities of the English tongue!)