MFU fic: For Every Action

[xparrot]

I wrote! New fic! Go me! Even if it is ridiculous fic. Initially inspired by a mfuwss discussion on our favorite secret agents' living spaces, and plotted on the journey back to America in collusion with gnine, who came up with half the pranks. It's slash (which, for me, seems to involve Napoleon having sex with lots of women. Yeah, I dunno. It's all in good fun?)

(Oh, and I drabbled again.)

MUNCLE: For Every Action {~6,000 words}
PG-13; slash, humor
A man's home is his castle, and Napoleon and Illya are laying siege on one another in a fierce, relentless, and very silly war of retribution.

( Illya rarely invited people over to his apartment... )

Comments

[epicycles.livejournal.com]

Oh my, that was perfect. I was giggling from beginning to end. Poor Napoleon, hissing cockroaches in his bathroom! Poor Illya, his papers all a-hoo! And I love the twist ending. I was laughing to myself about how jealous Illya's pranks were (same color as Gloria's lipstick indeed), but then there was slash!

Hooray fic! \o/!

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

So glad it got a giggle! ^_^ And yeah, slash...for some reason sex + these guys = silliness in my head XD

[erynn999.livejournal.com]

That was fantastic. I loved the wombats!!

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Hee, so glad you liked it. Everything is funnier with wombats!

[jessebee.livejournal.com]

You are an evil, evil thing and I wish to have your internet babies. :)

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Only if you change the electronic diapers! XP

[kleenexwoman.livejournal.com]

Hissing cockroaches :D yay, and the girls being chatty and awesome. This was A++.

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Hee, I love cockroaches...as long as they're fictional. And nowhere near my kitchen XPPP

(and yay, you like the girls! I was stressing about them just being pawns in the slash, I like my female chars to be more real than that...and hey, it would be fun to join in NS & IK's games, as long as you knew what you were getting into! XP)

[kleenexwoman.livejournal.com]

The girls were totally cute! I appreciated that they had agency and an active role in the story and got to have some fun with each other :D I think that totally made the story for me--happy ending for everyone.

[1000-egrets.livejournal.com]

I love it when they act like little brats. This was so great!
Thank you!

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Hee, I can't help it, I love it when they're being terrible to each other - it's all in good fun!

[kanders07.livejournal.com]

Loved the hissing cockroaches. Loved the bratty behavior. Boys will be boys. :) Great work, my dear.

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

So glad you enjoyed it! They are *such* boys sometimes...

[moonpupy.livejournal.com]

Oh. Oh. Oh. That was hysterical!! Loved, loved, loved it! More!

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Hee, thank you! ^_^

(more to come - though probably not this silly ^^)

[scherwood]

*giggle*
drool bucket, anyone?

I loved it! Thanx for sharing! *hugs*

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Glad you enjoyed it! ^_^

[naye]

Heeeeee! ♥

There's not a single part of this that doesn't make me grin! And I am in love with your characterization of the boys.

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

<33333333 So glad you liked it! I am having too much fun with them... ^___^

[crashtestskater.livejournal.com]

Hee hee. Very cute. There are such children. Okay, teens at most. It was smiles and giggles all the while reading. Thanks for the cuteness.

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Hee, they are such teens - that's what makes them fun ^__^

[leaper182.livejournal.com]

AHAHAHAHAHAHA.

Those were awesome pranks. And Illya ftw!

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Hee, so glad you enjoyed all the pranks! ^^

[edna-blackadder.livejournal.com]

OMG this was hilarious and adorable and just perfect. The boys are such brats, and I loved the thoroughly modern women as well.

::applauds::

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

So glad you liked it! I did like my girls...they don't need a man to have fun, though they do like to have one to make fun of...and Napoleon's so easy in that respect, too! XP

[gritsinmisery.livejournal.com]

*picks self up off floor, goes to find tissue for eyes*

I'll just, um... oh, hell. *laughs some more*

Remind me never to get on your bad side, m'kay?

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

*laughs* I wouldn't worry too much - half the pranks were Gnine's anyway, and I don't know where to get Madagascar hissing cockroaches anyway XPP

[gritsinmisery.livejournal.com]

I wouldn't know where to obtain them legally, but I do know at least two places in town that have them, should I be feeling larcenous.

[trystings.livejournal.com]

Oh, love this! (I watched S1, I can finally read MUNCLE fic! Yay :D)

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Hee, yays! Another convert! Hope you enjoy the fic (there's a lot of fun stuff in this fandom, check out my delicious recs! ^^)

[nangi-akki.livejournal.com]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Also really liked the intelligent,inventive women.
Thanks

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

So glad you enjoyed it! (and sorry for the last comment, had a slight posting problem ^^;)

[rike-tikki-tavi.livejournal.com]

Oh god, Napoleon's pink apartment made me giggle so hard, my stomach hurt. Great story.

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Hee, so glad I got a giggle - thank you! ^^

[periwinkle27.livejournal.com]

This is just hilarious and brilliantly written. I love Illya's jokes. I've bookmarked it so I can read it agan.

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

So glad you enjoyed it! Illya is much fun when he's being wicked ^^

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Thank you! ^_^

[eve_n_furter]

Good fun! Thanks!

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Glad you enjoyed it! :D