football fic

[xparrot]

Okay, yes. I am weak. Move along, move along, nothing to see here.

This isn't the start of anything. Just a character piece set sometime before the Shinryuuji game, concerning Yukimitsu, because I luffs him muchly; and featuring Hiruma's squishy side (...it's a very short fic.) Warning only for such language as befits Hiruma. (Oh, and a complete lack of understanding of proper practice techniques, because, dude, football. Usually I'm a stickler for accuracy but I'd be embarrassed to know 'em. Besides, Hiruma's practices are hardly standard anyway.)

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Comments

[stitcher2ficcer.livejournal.com]

Awwww.... gods dammit, you're doing it to me again. Making me fall in love with a couple characters who I don't know and dont have the time or inclination to get to know. Arrrrrggghhf! Why do I read your stuff and do this to myself?!

Have I told you how amusing I think it is that you're reading sports shounen? Football no less! **titters behind hand** But then, Hiruma sounds like just the kind of insanely warped character you'd fall for. Enjoy! Hopefully the writing will get you back on track writing in general and the results of that will transfer elsewhere.

[innueneko.livejournal.com]

Whee~ I'm staying awake long enough just to read this! XD That was real cute, I think because of how hard Hiruma had to work to be a great quarterback makes him ..I dunno what word to use. Well, he knows when to appreciate hard work and determination! :D

Okay, passing out now, will draw stuffs when I wake up. T__T;

[immicolia.livejournal.com]

Oh! Oh, dammit. I have to go to work in a few minutes so I don't have time to leave a proper comment (since when do I ever leave something coherent anyway) But, OH! Yuki! And Hiruma being as squishy as Hiruma gets. And... d'awwwwwwww! I am ded from teh cute.

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Argh! I know! football! It's not my fault that the chars are so demonically loveable...(really have no idea if you'd like the series or not, but...it is insanely cute, if nothing else...)

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Yah, with Hiruma, 'sympathy' is putting it kind of strong...but he does seem to have an understanding for those who need to work to get anywhere.

(yaaaaaay drawings! ^______^)

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Ee~ glad you died liked ^^ Yukimitsu is just the sweetest thing. Especially since he brings out Hiruma's squishy side. Such as it is.

[stitcher2ficcer.livejournal.com]

I think I'll stick to whatever fic you write for this one. Just don't have time to get into anything else.

{{Hugs}}

[ickaimp.livejournal.com]

Okay, dammit, I offically hate you now.
Have downloaded and read the entire frikkin' manga. Hate American Football, but dammit, you're right, the characters are just so damn cool.

And you've got them so in character here too. GO FUCKIN' BALDY!!! *CHEERS!!!*

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Oh, I know. I accept full responsibility. I understand what you're going through - I've always detested sports on principle, and football especially, and now I squeak when I hear the word "quarterback." It's pathetic.

Glad you liked the story, though! ^_^ probably more where that came from...

[anyjen.livejournal.com]

Awesome story. And don't worry, you're not the only one ensnared to read/watch es21 when you're not normally a fan of sports manga, OR american football. Hiruma got me at the first "YAHA!", watcha gonna do. :P

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Hee - I know more about American football than I ever did before, much to my embarrassment. But Hiruma's so coo~l!

Very glad you enjoyed this story, among all the others (I can't tell you how much I've appreciated all the reviews ^^)