gods above and below! How cute and wonderful is this!?
VERY!
You capture their voices so well, ALL of them, and the Zivaisms were well done, and ABBY! OMG! You nailed her onna head.
My favourite line: "FA-18 Hornets could land on that smile." Well done!
Great story and great characterization and dialogue. You got McGee's dismay just perfect, Abby's enthusiasm and Ziva's, well, Zivaness. (and that line about her pantherlike look, rowr! Just...yeah.)
I enjoyed the hell outta this and am off to look for more...
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winterfish
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Date: 2008-12-07 12:32 am (UTC)my
gods above and below! How cute and wonderful is this!?
VERY!
You capture their voices so well, ALL of them, and the Zivaisms were well done, and ABBY! OMG! You nailed her onna head.
My favourite line: "FA-18 Hornets could land on that smile." Well done!
Great story and great characterization and dialogue. You got McGee's dismay just perfect, Abby's enthusiasm and Ziva's, well, Zivaness. (and that line about her pantherlike look, rowr! Just...yeah.)
I enjoyed the hell outta this and am off to look for more...
*gives treats*