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Another ep tag, and hardly more than a ficlet, indulging [livejournal.com profile] gnine, who craved more Illya h/c at the end of "The Concrete Overcoat Affair."

MFU: Island Getaway {~2,300 words}
PG; gen, h/c; missing scene from the end of 3x12 "The Concrete Overcoat Affair, Part 2"
"There's just one thing--we better leave before the bombers get here."

Read it on AO3

Date: 2009-03-25 01:22 pm (UTC)
naye: A cartoon of a woman with red hair and glasses in front of a progressive pride flag. (heart red)
From: [personal profile] naye
I love that when you say "threw himself at", you mean that literally. Oh, Illya. ♥

And go Pia! Kick em in the balls! XD

So, so much love for Illya's slow losing of consciousness; he's tenaciousness in trying to hold on and the utter Illya-ness of not saying anything until the very last second. I can totally see Napoleon's face when he hears that. But he was there to catch Illya. To carry him, and OH they are so ADORABLE. I do love partners like this; who can depend on each other no matter what, and whose ability to snark is a little inhibited by the fact that they both came so close to losing the other (or thought the other lost).

And hee at the bit of conversation about Napoleon not calling Waverly (awww, Illya isn't expendable to us - or to Napoleon!), and then the description of his favorite kind of boat. XD

Poor cat. ♥

So. VERY MUCH LOVE. \o/

Date: 2009-03-25 05:32 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle shack)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
Ahahah I want to write more fight scenes, just to write tiny attack-cat Illya pounces! XDDDD

And falling unconscious never gets old. Any fandom, anywhere...but Illya does it especially well (oh, his hair, when he goes floppy~!)

And yes, poor wet Illya...

Date: 2009-03-26 12:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stitcher2ficcer.livejournal.com
**Grin** You're both hopeless! And I must be, too, since I agree with the "falling unconscious" assessment.

This story makes a little less sense to me than the previous one, given my non-familiarity with the context, but I'm afraid that together they are making me consider renting MUNCLE from Netflix (all four seasons plus "Return of MUNCLE" [1983] available there). Damn you and your H/C stories!! Can't you please write about some of your original characters and places so I can read them without being tempted to watch hours of television when I have so many other things to do!?! ^__~

Date: 2009-03-26 12:25 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle old skool)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
...but we wanted to watch MUNCLE with you! (do not get the movie, btw; besides not making much sense without the show, it's just not very good XP)

I need to get to my original characters! But I also need destressing now (freaking a bit about my imminent departure; you know how I feel about change, and saying goodbye to all my kids this week has been hard...I've been teaching most of them for 2 years!) So, yes, once I'm with Matt, then it's my chars, but for now I'm having fun with Illya?

Date: 2009-03-26 05:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stitcher2ficcer.livejournal.com
Oh, I forgot that this is your week of teaching good-byes. **BIG HUGS** I know you've become very fond of a few of your students. Will you try to stay in touch with any of them?

I'd enjoy MUNCLE more if I could watch it with you... as it is, even if I start soon, you'll probably be over it and on to something else by the time I get half way through. And if I get attached, you may very well go on to something new before you've finished some story or other that I really crave an ending to. I think I'll keep stitching and gardening for now instead of getting myself hooked on another show. God knows the yard needs the attention this year! Damn fallen trees and rose thorns!

Date: 2009-03-27 05:22 am (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle gaze)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
I gave my email to a few of my adult students, so I hope I will be able to stay in touch, at least a bit...my kids, probably not. Sigh. I'm so curious what they'll be like when they grow up...I guess that's a hazard of teaching small things...

Yeeeeeah, that's the hazard of being a fandom butterfly, it's hard for us to stay in anything for long! Sorry ^^; But we will want to show you guys at least a couple eps, we want to watch them with Dad! ^_^

Good luck gardening, don't get too thorn-pricked!

Date: 2009-03-27 02:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stitcher2ficcer.livejournal.com
I'm so curious what they'll be like when they grow up...I guess that's a hazard of teaching small things...

To this day I still wonder what happened to some of the kids I taught in Medford before you were born. If I had stayed and taught in one community for most of my life, as some of the teachers here in Pepperell have, I might have followed some of them or even had some of their children as students a couple decades later... as it is, I don't even remember most of their names. Though a certain Anthony Corrado I'll never forget.

Yes, I do recognize the hazards of your fandom flutter-by-ness. Long ago recognized that I can't possibly keep up and still live my life. 'Twould be great fun to watch a few eps with your dad, though. We'll have to add that to our list of things to do next time we see each other.

Date: 2009-03-25 02:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] georgiesmith.livejournal.com
Another fabulous story. And this coming from someone who really doesn't like "The Concrete Overcoat Affair". Yes, there are several nice moments as well as an incredibly important moment from the series in the episode, but I didn't like the whole old mobster thing, the forced marriage thing and Pia. But that's for another time.

I did adore your story though. It would have been nice if they had time to add in these little codas into the original stories - especially as yours rings so true.

Date: 2009-03-25 05:35 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle gaze)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
So glad you enjoyed it., even if you don't like the ep (it's got wet staggering Illya! I am very easy to please ^^) I like writing the things I'd love to see in an ep myself...though next up I've got some of my own ideas to try...

Date: 2009-03-26 12:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stitcher2ficcer.livejournal.com
Oh no. Does this mean you're going to continue leaving Rodney and John stranded, unhappy, anxious, and apart? Methinks Gnine and Naye need to sit you down for a good, long feast of tortured Rodney episodes as soon as you finish with S4 MUNCLE.

Date: 2009-03-25 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elijahwildchild.livejournal.com
Ooh - another lovely tag. I particularly love the immediacy of your style. Thank you.

though next up I've got some of my own ideas to try...

Yippee! Can't wait :oD

Date: 2009-03-26 09:24 am (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle gaze)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
Thank you! Yes, that's why I like to write in present tense on occasion; it lends itself to vividness...

Date: 2009-03-25 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theladyrose.livejournal.com
Oooh, what a beautifully illustrated moment of how they support each other. And as much as I love the largely unspoken action between our spy guys, I love how you integrate the other characters into the action, too - Pia and the eccentric mafioso Sicilian uncles still appear and kick eccentric ass while they're at it.

Date: 2009-03-26 09:25 am (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle gaze)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
So glad you enjoyed this one, too! Pia & her uncles cracked me up, so it was fun to write them kicking a bit of extra ass (if not as fun as Illya collapsing, naturally XD)

Date: 2009-03-25 08:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] parisntripfan.livejournal.com
Very well done. I love how you included Pia in the fight - that after everything that happened, she had enough and struck back. You really seem to have Illya's voice here - his observations as he tries to stay conscious not be to much of a burden for Napoleon and the others - as he would do that, stubborn Russian that he is.


I recently got the DVDs for UNCLE - and hence rediscovered my love for the show. Yes, there are problems with galore - but it was still a fun show to watch. And I love, love, love how Napoleon and Illya snark at each other all the time, unwilling - or unable - to tell each cares for the other (be that in a friendshippy or slashy way) but they sure do show it by risking life and limb to save the other.

Date: 2009-03-26 09:34 am (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle gaze)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
Thank you - I'm especially glad to know this Illya voice works for you. He's not quite as tricky as I would've expected, but still pretty slippery...

And oh, it's fun, silly as it is! For all its flaws, I love these guys lots & lots. The snark especially - John & Rodney have nothing on Illya & Napoleon when it comes to near-death snarking. But they are always there for each other - hits me right in my fangirl center!

Date: 2009-03-26 03:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ro-anshi.livejournal.com
Stop writing good h/c fic for things I'm not into. ::grumps::

Date: 2009-03-26 09:35 am (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle old skool)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
You never watched MUNCLE? really? But it's got Illya! *tempt tempt*

(I wish I could figure out how my fangirl buttons work. I enjoy the heck out of watching S&H but it doesn't get to me fannishly - Illya & Napoleon, though, something about them gets me right where it counts!)

Date: 2009-03-26 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stitcher2ficcer.livejournal.com
*Edited for brief addition*

**grins** My sentiments exactly. See my responses above under Naye's and Georgiesmith's threads.

So you didn't watch MUNCLE either? It's available on Netflix, damn Xparrot for making me look!

Date: 2009-03-26 03:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spike21.livejournal.com
I don't remember this episode, but this still works as a lovely stand-alone about their certainty of one another.

Date: 2009-03-26 09:39 am (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle gaze)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
I cannot get over their faith in one another - that's always a big kink for me, but when it's spies, and they're always undercover and lying, and they're always told how they're expendable, and yet they still have that absolute trust - eee~!

Date: 2009-03-26 07:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] utopiantrunks.livejournal.com
Awwww. I like the understated devotion you write for Napoleon. The subtle restraint of sarcasm, and the sigh felt only through touching shoulders. ♥ As if he'd leave his Illya to that fire on the horizon! His little, portable Illya. The carrying was both funny and sweet. I loved the checking in afterwards, too. "How bad?" ♥

Ahh. Nice.

Date: 2009-03-26 09:44 am (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle gaze)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
Thank you~! Mmm, devotion... And they'd totally sit with their shoulders together, that's why I love 'em! <3

*manfully restrains herself from poking*

Date: 2009-03-26 12:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jessebee.livejournal.com
Ah, VERY nice. While I'm not fond of third season so much, I've always enjoyed Concrete Overcoat. And it's got so many great moments with the boys! Wet underwater Illya is for the win. I much enjoyed the immediacy of this, and the way Napoleon's concern comes across so clearly in fairly few words. I also like his humanity coming through, that he is tired enough to lose a bit of the urbanity and how Illya knows him so well. A lovely, caring tag. :D

Date: 2009-03-26 12:22 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle gaze)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
I'm not a big fan of s3 myself (there's a few eps I fastforwarded through parts of, couldn't stand watching even once...), but it's got a lot of cute moments between the boys, and I especially like Concrete Overcoat for being more dramatic than some (also, Illya-torture!)

And yeah, I have the feeling that with Napoleon, what you see is *never* what you actually get, so it's fun to try to strip him down...

Date: 2009-03-26 05:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dark-cygnet.livejournal.com
*sigh* What a lovely way to spend a rainy afternoon, reading this story. I like your style with words, it has an immediancy (is that a word ;)and vitality that makes me see the whole thing in my head. I also really like your take on N and I. Verra nice! Here, have a pretty from me as thanks! Take care!

Image (http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v732/darkcygnet07/?action=view&current=Illya.jpg)

Date: 2009-03-27 05:19 am (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle old skool)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
So glad you enjoyed it! And eeeee, pretty~~~ indeed! (mmm I love his 4th season hair...)

Date: 2009-03-27 07:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] edna-blackadder.livejournal.com
Stalkerly wandered over here and so read this. And it is awesome.

The whole thing is excellent, but this passage was especially spot-on:

Illya doesn't fear a blighted reputation, but he detests weakness, and in himself more than anywhere else. It's galling to lean on his partner as they make their way up the shore—but it would be more embarrassing to fall flat on his face, again, so he doesn't push Napoleon away.

YES. That is how Illya thinks. So very IC for him to not say anything until he's seconds from passing out, and that is exactly how he would feel about it afterward: he should've been able to make it, even if he had perfectly legitimate reasons for not being able to. And Napoleon is perfect too.

Date: 2009-03-27 07:29 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle gaze)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
Thank you, I appreciate the stalking! *g* Poor Illya; he's ten times stronger than your average guy (he has to be, to survive being hit on the head that many times XP) and yet it's still not enough...

Date: 2009-03-28 01:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] edna-blackadder.livejournal.com
You're most welcome. I'll try to read your other fic sometime this weekend (stupid school is unfortunately a priority, but I am intrigued!).

Lovely!

Date: 2009-03-28 02:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apicula.livejournal.com
Very nice story.
Even as I quite enjoy the episode (the highlights have already been mentioned ;-), I find - as with many season 3 episodes - it somehow doesn't take itself serious enough. I'm not very good at putting this in words, but I just wanted to say that your story feels as "real" as the episode should, and I'll be thinking of it as the actual end of the episode when I rewatch it.
Thanks!

Re: Lovely!

Date: 2009-03-29 04:22 am (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle gaze)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
As far as s3 goes, I liked this ep better than most, partly because it was a little more serious, but yeah, I would've liked seeing the situation taken with a bit more gravitas. So, fic! Very glad it worked for you ^_^

Date: 2009-03-28 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tanndell.livejournal.com
You ficced! Again! More MFU! I'm speechless and delighted and overwhelmed by the sweetness of this tag to an episode I haven't even seen (Must take courage in both hands and watch season 3). It's great for a h/c writer to have canon evidence of characters who suffer with stoic disdain to the point of collapse. Oh, Illya! Now, can we have some slash please, yes?

Date: 2009-03-29 04:24 am (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle old skool)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
Hee - s3 is as bad as you've heard, but on the other hand, there are a lot of super-cute moments between the guys. I recommend watching with your finger on the fast-forward button, that's how I've managed certain eps...

Now, can we have some slash please, yes?

Funny you should mention that, considering what I was writing last night *cough*...

Date: 2009-03-28 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vysila.livejournal.com
Followed the link from [livejournal.com profile] muncle and wanted to say how much I enjoyed this lovely bit of fiction. You took us right inside Illya's floppy-haired head - and what a nifty place to be!

Especially liked this bit of characterization:
Sometimes it is laziness, but as often it's pragmatism; Napoleon doesn't like to make promises he is not sure of keeping.

Illya doesn't fear a blighted reputation, but he detests weakness, and in himself more than anywhere else.


Nice work, hope to read more MFU from you.

Date: 2009-03-29 04:21 am (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle old skool)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
So glad you enjoyed it! I've only got one other MUNCLE fic posted now, but I do rather like it inside Illya's head, hope to get back there soon... ^^

--Also, you're the owner of Partner Mine? Fantastic site, it was one of the first I found when I got into the show (...um, a month ago). Your fic recs are very helpful for a newcomer, and your s1 ep reviews are wonderful!
Edited Date: 2009-03-29 04:26 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-03-29 03:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vysila.livejournal.com
Oh yay that there is more fic from you, I'm looking forward to reading your Gurnius tag scene story.

And thanks for your kind words on my website. Glad you found it helpful! Some day I may even update again...

Date: 2009-03-29 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ilkaril.livejournal.com
Hihi you are a fantastic writer. love the story. Ilya is so mutch fun :)

Date: 2009-03-29 04:25 am (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle gaze)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2009-04-30 11:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wneleh.livejournal.com
Very nice!

I think MFU is going to be my next reading fandom :-).

- Helen

Date: 2009-05-01 04:31 am (UTC)
ext_3572: (Default)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it! ^^

It's a nice reading fandom - I've got a bunch of links up on my delicious recs (the link's on the left) for gen and slash.

Date: 2009-05-01 10:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wneleh.livejournal.com
I'll check them out! Any particularly good smarm out there?

BTW, I just rec'd one of your stories on a parenting list - we're having a what-are-we-reading-now discusssion - because, well, it's what I'm reading now, and also I think MFU post-eps are pretty accessible in general. And it's a good story (will comment when I'm done!)

- Helen

Date: 2009-05-01 10:46 am (UTC)
ext_3572: (muncle gaze)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
I've got gen tagged (really ought to tag smarm as well!) - for smarm I'd recommend Lee the T and Loretta Ross. (Lee also does slash, but I haven't read much of it yet; her gen is delightful, though.)

Oooh, is it a public list? (...er, yes, I may be a little too fond of seeing recs for my own stuff ^^;; It's such an ego-boost, though - thank you!)

Date: 2009-05-01 11:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wneleh.livejournal.com
Thanks for the recs!

No, the list isn't public - I find parenting stuff can get much more walled-off than things fannish, perhaps because it's not just fictional bodies we're talking about. It's a list for moms who practice attachment parenting with older children and who are open to not homeschooling. The owner writes epic X-Men slash, so fanfic is an occasional topic :-)

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