The characterizations ring true, even the twin mirages (and I liked how Napoleon argues with them even knowing they are hallucinations.) This would have made a fine episode, a little like "Deadly Quest," which pared down to brass tacks NS and IK's friendship, a theme that underscores many of their missions. You use evocative turns of the phrase, so that you could almost feel the heat of the sun and the thirst. I had been complaining there is nothing long and satisfying anymore--in MFU fic--what did you think I meant? Thank you for this. It's excellent and I'm a sucker for HC too!
Thank you, I am so glad you enjoyed it! (Man, how much would I give for an episode of this? That you'd like to see one as well is a fine compliment indeed!) Good to know I'm not the only h/c addict about ^__^
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Thanks!
Date: 2009-05-09 11:58 pm (UTC)Re: Thanks!
Date: 2009-05-10 07:24 am (UTC)