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This chapter is...not as angsty as the last one will be. Sorry, Katsura-san...

Gintama: Resuscitation, 2/3 {6,447 words}
R; Gintoki/Katsura, Joui war-era
"For a while Katsura tells himself that it's no more than the camaraderie of the battleground."

"He hates the feeling that the Joui cause is held back because of him, is being further delayed by his weakness."

Read it on AO3

Date: 2011-04-01 05:00 am (UTC)
ext_175369: (What are you writing?)
From: [identity profile] nijibug.livejournal.com
Riiiight when I was about to go to bed XD
Guess I'll read this first!

Aaand the review

Date: 2011-04-01 05:24 am (UTC)
ext_175369: (magatama gold)
From: [identity profile] nijibug.livejournal.com
("So what do we do if he doesn't make it back?" Sakamoto wondered, some months ago; Katsura only shook his head, while Takasugi smirked and said, "Buy some bleach and silver dye." Gintoki, snoozing by the fire, opened one eye and added, "Don't forget the hair curler.")

Favorite part ♥


Also, idek why but the Takasugi you write comes off as strangely hot to me. *blinks in confusion while fanning self*

It's a hard contest, but Takasugi yields in the end, grins at Katsura fiercely and says, "Okay, you're back."

It's lines like these. ♥ ♥


Ohmygooooooddddd you incorporated THE flashback sceeeennnneeee!!! *glomps* I love youuuu~


I'm a little surprised you had Gin initiate! I always expected it would be Zura pursuing Gin based on what I inferred from "Happy Endings".


♥♥♥Sakamoto~♥♥♥ (Hooray for making him perceptive! *huggles*)


It's unfair, after all their years before of squabbling over food and their teacher's attention and everything else, that Gintoki would be so unselfish in this, that he gives and gives and doesn't take.

I appreciate how subtly yet decisively you've highlighted this aspect. :]

Re: Aaand the review

Date: 2011-04-01 07:42 am (UTC)
ext_3572: (gintama sword)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
Also, idek why but the Takasugi you write comes off as strangely hot to me. *blinks in confusion while fanning self*

It's odd, generally I don't feel much for Takasugi one way or another, but while writing him I kind of ended up rather fond of this Takasugi, before he's totally twisted. He was their nakama once, after all, so...

And Sakamoto I love anyway, for all that we've seen almost nothing of him, so had to give him a few moments ^^

Ohmygooooooddddd you incorporated THE flashback sceeeennnneeee!!! *glomps* I love youuuu~

had to put all the six zillion times I've rewatched the Shiroyasha fake-out preview to good use! XD

As far as your other comments go...eheh, wait and see? ^^; This is still part of the "Happy Endings" continuum, but the route's a little twisted...

PS

Date: 2011-04-01 07:42 am (UTC)
ext_3572: (Default)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
go to bed!! oyasumi~~! ^^

Re: PS

Date: 2011-04-03 02:23 pm (UTC)
ext_175369: (What are you writing?)
From: [identity profile] nijibug.livejournal.com
I am now devouring Joui-era GinZura fic. What have you done to me? XDDD

Re: PS

Date: 2011-04-03 07:16 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (gintama to the rescue)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
Ahahah - oops? ([livejournal.com profile] what_we_dream has some good ones from that era...)

Re: PS

Date: 2011-04-03 07:52 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (gintama op cosplay)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
I hadn't but now I have!

(...ah, I can't read GinZura in present time, though. I try but even when it's well-written and IC it doesn't feel right to me ^^;; I am such the worse yaoi fangirl ever(tm)!)

Re: PS

Date: 2011-04-03 08:14 pm (UTC)
ext_175369: (What are you writing?)
From: [identity profile] nijibug.livejournal.com
I agree, but this particular writer starts them off as kids, and by the time you're eased into the present, there are some lovely Yorozuya/Sakata family scenes waiting for you!

(As for myself, I read Zura as straight — in fact, I rather ship him with Ikumatsu orz)

Re: PS

Date: 2011-04-03 08:19 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (gintama wtf yaoi)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
Hee, yes, I did like the Yorozuya stuff! ^^

Hmm, I don't know if I read Zura as gay or straight...he strikes me as a "falls in love with the person" type. But he and Ikumatsu were cute (...even if the obvious OTP is Zura/Elizabeth ^^;;;;;)

Re: PS

Date: 2011-04-03 08:20 pm (UTC)
ext_175369: (Yorozuya scarf!)
From: [identity profile] nijibug.livejournal.com
*is currently unable to reply due to being repeatedly beaten over the head by Eli's placard for even daring to suggest that any Zura pairing other than Eli/Zura exists*

Re: PS

Date: 2011-04-03 10:25 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (Default)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
...the real question, is Zura/Eli het? slash? bestiality? ^^;;;

Re: *bandages bleeding skull*

Date: 2011-04-03 08:24 pm (UTC)
ext_175369: (Yorozuya scarf!)
From: [identity profile] nijibug.livejournal.com
Haha, I died reading the part where poor, poor Shinpachi was choking on the beef and nobody care. Also at Gin's "YOU'RE NOT ALLOWED TO DATE UNTIL YOU'RE MARRIED" lololol

You make a good point re:Zura. Though I guess you could say that at the present he's married to his work. :]

Date: 2011-04-01 01:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hyoutan.livejournal.com
*bounces* Oh my goodness! This is marvelous~

Angst or not, this is gorgeous, and I have a super hard time not imagining it as canon....Especially your Sakamoto and Takasugi :P

Date: 2011-04-01 07:19 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (gintama sword)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
Wah, thank you, I'm so glad it's working for you! Especially Sakamoto and Takasugi, because they're so far removed from what we see of them now - very glad to know they're still recognizable ^^

Date: 2011-04-01 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snarkydame.livejournal.com
This is so gorgeous. And I love that it's Katsura's POV, with his poet's heart. ♥ and the dynamic between him and Gintoki, especially at the end there, when he figures it out. . . oh ouch. My heart.

Date: 2011-04-01 07:37 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (gintama sword)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
Katsura's POV is an excuse to overindulge in metaphor, though it's not nearly as funny now as it is in the regular canon ^^; Poor boys...

But thank you, glad you're enjoying their pain the story!

Date: 2011-04-02 02:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shayera.livejournal.com
Aww, Gintoki. I can absolutely believe this, the way he does this to help a friend, for the here and now... It doesn't do anything for himself, and he isn't thinking about long-term consequences - he's just protecting what he can protect. I can see that as a very Gintoki thing to do, if he thought that's what it took.

And I love how you make it clear to the reader that Gintoki isn't taking any pleasure from this, and that he isn't in love the way Katsura is - although Katsura as the POV character doesn't notice!

Poor boys.

Date: 2011-04-02 06:15 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (gintama sword)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
Yeah...the thing I had trouble getting across is how young they all are; we don't have their exact ages but they couldn't have been more than 17-18 during the war...not really old enough to have any idea what they're doing with their hearts, especially with them doing most of their growing-up at war and on the battlefield. You have to feel sorry for all of them...

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