Gintama Fic: Pandemonium 4/?

[xparrot]

Gintama: Pandemonium, 4/? {4,478 words}
gen; PG-13; Yorozuya, the Shinsengumi, along with Zura and most of the rest of the cast
Today's lessons for the Yorozuya trio: Beware of Greeks bearing gifts, don't count your chickens before they're hatched, and be careful when life seems too good to be true, because it might be a sign that everything is soon going to go very, very badly.

Chapter 4: Indigestion can cause bad dreams, but so can a lot of other things.

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Comments

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Hee - I don't think there's an interaction between any set of chars in this series that wouldn't be interesting, they're all so much fun! But Shinpachi and Okita appeals to...well, my sadistic side, I suppose. ^^; It's true that we don't get much of it, even though we've seen Shin-chan with the other three Shinsengumi...

Ahhh, Shouyou-sensei...yes, those little heartbreaking fragments of flashback are so tantalizing, and I confess I love them.

Thank you so much for all the detailed comments, they make my day. ^_^ This is where the fic starts shifting gears, as it were...hope it continues to entertain!

[ah-chan.livejournal.com]

Yes, the storyline always kicks up a notch whenever we get another appearance from Shouyou-sensei ^__^ can't help but love them.

Aha, the fic is so very enjoyable, I figure the least I can do is respond accordingly? I'm glad you're able to make sense of my comments - I feel I'm mostly just repeating I ♥ GINTAMA, I ♥ GEN, I ♥ THAT YOU'RE WRITING GEN FOR GINTAMA SO SPECTACULARLY WELL ad nauseum.

So uh, sorry for spamming your inbox with comments for the last few chapters in one go - I had to catch up!

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

Eee, never apologize, waking up to all these fantastic comments filling my inbox was so awesome, I can't even tell you! Knowing that someone is enjoying reading this story this much makes it all worthwhile ^__^

And so so glad that you like the gen-ness, and the Shinpachi & Kagura bits, and such, because they're some of my favorite things about the series, and I'm happy to know I'm pulling them off, and also so happy to know I'm not the only one who loves them! ^_^