Saiyuki ficlet

[xparrot]

So. My dear sainted fic-writing yaoi-loving mother has joined the ranks of lj. Hi, Mom!

In practice this won't change anything, since she's been reading my journal regularly anyways. But naturally for her debut she went and stumped me at my own meme game. (Might be owing a few more drabbles for this, too. Everyone is welcome to play!)

Thus, a drabble, per her request. Except it turned into a ficlet. Saiyuki, post-"Remembering to Breathe," so I suppose it counts as a spoiler of sorts for the as-yet unwritten ending (which will be written! honest!)
Gojyo/Hakkai. Who I haven't written in far too long, so please forgive how rusty I am.

Clear-headed

Comments

[airairo.livejournal.com]

Love. *__* You know, I have been craving 58 fic lately so was very very happy to see this. ^_^ *floats away a happy 58 fangirl*

[gnine.livejournal.com]

Mmm, happiness, so very verrry cute! Wheee, I'd missed you writing these boys...

Did I mention the Hakkai plushie I found? Wanted a Gojyou one as well but they didn't have it, sadly :) Still though, wheee...

[nenya85.livejournal.com]

Lovely -- and I have no idea what went on before it (lol) I liked Gojyo and Hakkai together, you caught the rhythym of the way they are. And I loved the little throwaway line: Gotta make sure Goku's not drunk enough to ask Sanzo for a dance, he might get an ear shot off or something.

(If I did things right that should come out in Italic... ^ _ ^;;;

Impressed as I am with the drabble/ficlet/whatever (and I am) I'm even more impressed with your mother! I'm still at the hiding-fanfic-from-my-kids stage. Of course they're a whole lot younger, but I don't know that I'd ever feel comfortable exchanging slash with my daughter either -- so thumbs up!

Love It!

[stitcher2ficcer.livejournal.com]

:-D

Very nice! Very sweet. I love it. Even out of practice you--as usual--beautifully capture their characters and their relationship. I hope it made you long to write them again, so you'll be inspired to finish Remembering to Breathe. It sure makes me long to read them again (and to get the ending of RtoB!) after many moons away from Saiyuki.

Thank you!!

Now, shall I wander back to your meme and see if I can stump you again so I can get more? or get a Ban/Ginji piece? *hehe*

[aelin015.livejournal.com]

awww... thank you. it was so... satisfying.

[lady-karasu.livejournal.com]

I love your mother. ^_^ (Mmmm, Saiyuki fic- yum.)

Heh. I still have to go back and play for real; I knew you'd know the one I posted before, but I HAD to do one for One Piece. ^_~

[tripoverhercats.livejournal.com]

POUNCE!!

Man, I have to cruise your journal more often!

Remembering to Breathe! Epilogue squeeage!

Loved dear Gojyo, he was so shattered by the loss it's fitting that he's jumpy if he can't find Hakkai.

Purrs happily... love your mother for this request.

Wanders off in happy daze.

[stitcher2ficcer.livejournal.com]

After your reminder of it during our wee-hours talk this morning, I had to come back and reread this. **Sigh** So sweet and satisfying, and even moreso now that RtoB really is completed. Will you post it on ff.net after you finish posting RtoB?